Open Poetry #31 |
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A Metaphors Ode |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
A Metaphors Ode I call my ode a metaphor And hold my load below in store Wrapped in dup and tea bag style To make a cup of healthy wile To this I add a spoon or two To sweeten up this wile of brew And sip it in a nights repast To light the lights within my past For there I find fraternity Having tea with sympathy Discussing all the do’s and don’t And even bringing up a won’t From there I walk a rainbow road With my lass and kiss a toad Bring to life the unforeseen Collect it like a whales baleen And with the essence of this brew I give my vow again to you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Morning Sy! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tell me she smiled and said Yes! ![]() ![]() |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A well-brewed potion for us this morning Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"From there I walk a rainbow road With my lass and kiss a toad Bring to life the unforeseen Collect it like a whales baleen And with the essence of this brew I give my vow again to you." Aha! Into my library with this cup full of wise words. Good one Sy..love it! ![]() ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour....I'm not too sure about "kissin' toads".....but you are certainly a "prince" of a poet. Enjoyed. Cinnamon toast with tea. hugs, Chris ![]() "At one glance |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Good morning, Seymour ![]() I'm like Chris, I don't know about kissing a toad. ![]() But, yes, you are a prince, kind sir. ![]() Have a good day!! Hugs, ![]() Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is as sweet as you are hon! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Good morning sweet. ![]() Sunshine She smiled, Hugs. scorpio Thank you love. Nancy, So glad you liked, Hugs. Chris, Be right there for the goodies. Hugs. Ethel Hey you never know when you kiss a toad. LOL Gentle, You just made my day. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great piece this afternoon! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing Thank you sweet. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
cute AND clever...a sure recipe for success |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Discussing all the do’s and don’t And even bringing up a won’t LOL... the dreaded won't. *G* I like this very much, my friend... thanks for the smiles. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr Thank you for the read and comment. suthern A smile, is a smile, is a smile. Thank you sweet. ![]() |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nicely written, Sy. Isabel is such a lucky woman. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Sy, I always enjoy reading such wonder from your magical pen! Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
How sweet. Your poems flow so gently and send with words, smiles. Thank you, Sy. You are a gem! Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg I'll have to tell her that. LOL jaicie114 Thank you and love and light back. Sadelite And you are a dear. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy It's late, I'm late..but still enjoyed! ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Seymour, as always, my eyes are brightened by your ponderings! Enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Better late than never. ![]() iliana And my eyes are lite by your reply. |
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