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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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V Line through the mist I hear them bouncing echoes off the trees from a watery shadow squawking nervously as they plan their trip home again to dot blue skies in a northern return |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
They woke me early this morning, seems there's a note of anticipation in their voices. I can't say I'll be glad to see them leave either; the pond will be quiet in their absence. Thanks for this one, Helen, you must have been reading my mind...  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
*smile* They stop to rest and feed along the river that is near me. Sometimes there are thousands. When they are on the move, their sounds herald dawn and dusk. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful captured moment Helen. Eric |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sorry Slicky -- it's just me, but the title instantly put another image in my mind...  -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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