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No Room For Warmth
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No Room For Warmth |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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No Room For Warmth the bed is cold now and the only place I can find to sleep is wrapped in your memory |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Dreamy! Hope you sleep well ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweetly sad |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Loved this Helen! Richy |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"I like winter for the snuggling . . . or at least I used to Now, I'm too cold to fall asleep . . ." |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Wow! I've been there. Well written! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
It would seem that you've got the victory over a broken heart and have mastered how best to express that experience. You are a very good writer and I have enjoyed all of your writing since coming to PIP a short time ago! Grover. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This feels like a mixture of closure and yet an ongoing yearning....hmmm i know that feeling.  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is so nice! Great write! JL  |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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