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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-25 12:20 PM



No Room For Warmth

the bed
is cold now
and the only
place I can
find to sleep
is wrapped
in your memory



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2004-02-25 12:29 PM


Dreamy!

       Hope you sleep well ...

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-02-25 04:03 AM


sweetly sad
Richy
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3 posted 2004-02-25 04:19 AM





Loved this Helen!


Richy


Krawdad
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4 posted 2004-02-25 01:40 PM


"I like winter for the snuggling . . .
or at least I used to

Now, I'm too cold to fall asleep . . .
"

icebox
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in the shadows
5 posted 2004-02-25 05:53 PM


Wow!  I've been there.

Well written!

Grover
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6 posted 2004-02-25 06:05 PM


It would seem that you've got the victory over a broken heart and have mastered how best to express that experience. You are a very good writer and I have enjoyed all of your writing since coming to PIP a short time ago! Grover.
gemjop
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7 posted 2004-04-02 04:37 PM


This feels like a mixture of closure and yet an ongoing yearning....hmmm i know that feeling.


JL
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8 posted 2004-04-02 04:49 PM


This is so nice!  Great write!
JL

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state of mind
9 posted 2004-04-02 06:15 PM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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