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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-27 01:33 AM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

WildPoet
Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 205
California

1 posted 2004-01-27 02:31 AM

Sweet and hot!

WildPoet

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

2 posted 2004-01-27 07:00 AM

You know, when I paint those cherry red lips, they're anything from sticky sweet. Maybe I'm buying the wrong lipstick.

This is a bit steamy a write...but yet...I still think of kissing my husband, and all that color and stickiness would be messy, taste of bland wax and douse any "steam" that was there to begin with.

McLean

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-01-27 08:54 AM

Very nice! Love the lips...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

4 posted 2004-01-27 09:01 AM

though this piece has nothing to do with lipstick ;-) thanks so much for the comments.
snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-01-27 09:57 AM

Unique presentation. Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

6 posted 2004-01-27 10:30 AM

OMG! I read it again, snow, after seeing it wasn't about lipstick at all...and I found...that this one IS INDEED steamy. My interpretation now is very not rated for this room! I think it belongs in line with my "Stress Induced" poem. Think of it...Cherry Red and salty jerky...I would never eat anything with that gooky lipstick on, for fear it would douse the flavor. Ha! I'm enjoying your write even better now!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2004-01-27 10:32 AM

ooohh..I LIKE it....

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2004-01-27 11:40 AM

Snow~
The sheer sensual beauty of this piece is reflected in your -

'red silk afternoon landscape'

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

9 posted 2004-01-27 06:39 PM

Chris thanks so much!

Gentle Spirit "ooohh" *smiling* thanks!!!

Marge your thoughts are always so appreciated. thank you!

McLean Omg.. you made it worth posting this piece here .. just for that second comment from you. I can almost see the look on your face.. *giggles* ... thanks soooo much for coming back for a second read!!

Snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

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