Open Poetry #31 |
Lord of the Rings 1V - Return of Boromir |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A challenge was issued at another site to write a poem based on a given title. This is what I came up with. It was such a little thing that arrow in my chest then came another and a third to carry me to rest But there can be no resting with promises undone I think I finally understand I'll stay till Frodo's won Betrayed by my emotions then I betrayed him too the passions, once my downfall will work to see this through No grave of water holds me for I will rise and shine and through death I'll braver be the victory shall be mine I'll hide here in the shadows and follow Frodo's trail to offer mist assistance in this I shall not fail I see him with my brother he says he was my friend these words I shall remember until the very end I hold him at the furnace for this shall be my test I will help destroy the ring and go in peace to rest. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ This is just a WONDERFULLY inspired piece~ What a soft and pleasurable read~ *Huglets* Good day, sweet lady~ Drop me a note and let me know what's happening with the grandson~ LOVE YOU~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I must confess that I hadn't read Tolkien's treasures until recently... and then, with each page, I wondered where my sanity had been all the years I avoided Middle Earth. *S* I'm glad I didn't wait years to appreciate you, my friend... this is wonderful! *S* I think you've captured well the strong heart that was overpowered by a yearning for power. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kethry -- I loved this! ......jo |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have not seen the last movie yet....I enjoyed this write much, and look forward to seeing the movie.... ~~**~~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Good job -- I could visualize his presence through your descriptions. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Kethry...much enjoyed! Hugs~ ~ Can I keep you? ~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I probably have to get off my hind end and get to the movies someday to see for myself, this magnificent story... it sparks SO many imaginations. Well done, Keth. |
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