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The Hunter
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The Hunter |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
He gives out I-love-you's like sweet candy that leaves me sick Fertalising a fetus of fear within my womb Giving into temptation for a taste of the sweetness Just one more kiss... leaving my lips sticky and stained I missed that in the fine print of his warranty (He had many owners) He throws sincerity into the breeze A kite that he doesn't care to hold onto Spiralling out of control Down Down Down His rough hands smoothing over a hemline of truth Cracking the china edges with his sharp words Cutting like glass Shattering the night into four parts Each a higher reality of his own command All but a game for the hunter Stuffing his belly full with delicious women Only to throw them back up again To squirm Trapped in supple sacks of illusion Always falling in love with the possibility of him ever being real Infatuated by a memory Sparking yet another dream Living in a shadow of hope that one day he may fall. |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Very good. WildPoet  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Loved this Fire Fairy Terific Write!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Charlotte this is very good writing with much strength behind it! I am glad I went searching. Well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
he has fallen my friend, he has...don't wish him any bad...just move forward and learn the signs and listen to the most important voice in your heart...be glad for the experience, you've been made a wealthy woman...more aware, and hopefully less scarred and torn....feel pity for him, nothingless, nothingmore. Love and hugs |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow! |
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