Open Poetry #31 |
Whimsey |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I would settle on the daylight rays Thinking prophecies of coming days Littered dusts of some impatient landing Filmy thrusts pass through and leave me standing Just a veil in the wind honey dew and daffy trimmed I would settle on the daylight rays Tinkering with better ways Fanning to and fro the airs of lesser cares Fueling up on solar fares and glowing fully charged Yet silent Copyright Kkh 1/26/04 |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
There's that word again, "Whimsey"...LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Love your writing, too. McLean |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I loved it my friend. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You know how to bend the light in dance, sweet friend, turn the light into prisms and let them scatter about, God Bless You, this sent me on a whimsey, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Hey, "Whimsey" or not, I loved this one. Garfield |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Not a bad thing to settle on, at all... Kathleen, your words always glow! So enjoyed, Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is good...darn good! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
has that guazy veillike misty quality like pining away for somthing that is just right there, playing peeka boo with you, god do i make any sense here? i loved this and just spun my own thing out of it like spinning cotton candy from snowthick clouds above right now, im getting cabin fever i guess |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Love this whimsey! It seemed to me so appropriate for this day, so I'm enjoying it again. ~K~ |
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