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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-01-26 10:31 PM


I would settle on the daylight rays
Thinking prophecies of coming days
Littered dusts of some impatient landing
Filmy thrusts pass through and leave me standing
Just a veil in the wind honey dew and daffy trimmed
I would settle on the daylight rays
Tinkering with better ways
Fanning to and fro the airs of lesser cares
Fueling up on solar fares and glowing fully charged

Yet silent

Copyright Kkh 1/26/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
McLean
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1 posted 2004-01-26 11:37 PM


There's that word again, "Whimsey"...LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!  Love your writing, too.  

McLean

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2004-01-26 11:40 PM


I loved it my friend.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2004-01-26 11:46 PM




(smiles) You know how to bend the light in dance, sweet friend, turn the light into prisms and let them scatter about, God Bless You, this sent me on a whimsey, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

ggrn3
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4 posted 2004-01-27 12:40 PM


Hey,
"Whimsey" or not, I loved this one.

Garfield

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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5 posted 2004-01-27 03:00 AM




Not a bad thing to settle on, at all...

Kathleen, your words always glow!

So enjoyed,
Richy


passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-01-27 03:50 AM


this is good...darn good!
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2004-01-27 12:50 PM


has that guazy veillike misty quality like
pining away for somthing that is just right there, playing peeka boo with you,
god do i make any sense here?
i loved this and just spun my own thing out of it
like spinning cotton candy from snowthick clouds above right now, im getting cabin fever i guess

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
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8 posted 2004-03-27 09:49 PM


Love this whimsey!  It seemed to me so appropriate for this day, so I'm enjoying it again.  ~K~
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