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A Season Unto Me
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A Season Unto Me |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Season Unto Me I play the darkness until it lifts the weight and eases you to my touch. Desertion, a thing of the past, as I light the fires that flame temptation to these eyes lost in time. I lay the missing in you, translate the fragile to the sidestepping of the pounding my emotions took, the power of my will now taking over. You can't see behind this cover, the hidden that will eventually terrace the tomorrows into beds of happiness, seeding the changes breaking through to the me in you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You can't see behind this cover, the hidden that will eventually terrace the tomorrows into beds of happiness, seeding the changes breaking through to the me in you. Beautiful Maureen. Chris "At one glance |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"I lay the missing in you, translate the fragile to the sidestepping of the pounding my emotions took, the power of my will now taking over" can i borrow a cup of "will", ive seemed to have run out. writing your way through transistions... exposing yourself in ways im not brave enough to, as is so in all your poetry.. and this is why i admire you Maureen.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me smile as a gift of happiness to another is returned to sender with joy of your own! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Of the many writes you've done, and I've admired...this one seeped a foundation of strength. Beautiful write. TD |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
you make me stammer, shudder, and stutter. In a really good way....very well written |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just lovely, Maureen... glad I read this tonight... Hugs to you, my friend...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66 |
This was a great write I could feel all the emotions played out in your poem. ~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - you always find just the right words to write... BC |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Stunning, I feel you on the move... With the courage to embrace the abyss and to read it...: "I play the darkness until it lifts the weight and eases you to my touch...." Such truth here, such a letting go, albeit ever so painful ... : "I lay the missing in you, translate the fragile ..." [maybe I am reading in, but this poem strikes deep to the marrow and engenders so much more than your words....] ~C |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
some very good lines, artfully expressed. Enjoyed your effort. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! I'm in awe and smiling |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Superb and powerful! |
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