Open Poetry #31 |
The Dreams we Lived |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Lights on the water sing of my heart silvergull the sea will hear us fly above horizon's edge return to me the dreams we lived |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Cleanly beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
crisply written and expressed! I am a lover of the beach, so this one was special! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe I need to go there *sigh* |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Lights on the water sing of my heart silvergull the sea will hear us fly above horizon's edge return to me the dreams we lived ~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~ Living; this wide-awake dream called life distant gull's cry- as waves crash into foam memories too rise and fall. Thank you Inked One ~P |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
You can really feel the glittering of the ocean and smell the salt of the air. You place it together so very well. I enjoyed very much! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess THe egg is a gem. Beautifully done. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Beautiful words Years ago I read Jonathon Livingstone Seagull. You brought the images back. Thanks Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good! Grover. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for dropping in |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I like this mood in you ma'am. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice imagery...you can really see this one... |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Good job! |
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