Open Poetry #31 |
Words Keep Us Close At Heart |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I felt a deep connection Within the shortest time As we talked about our lives And our great love of rhyme I opened up my heart And I let you come inside With my feelings all laid out I had nothing left to hide Some people come into our lives They're like a breath of fresh air They bring words of inspiration Which show how much they care 'tho miles may separate us Words keep us close at heart You have really made a difference With the words that you impart We share a special bond Through our love of poetry You've opened up my eyes And enabled me to see * * * "For memory has painted this perfect day with colors that never fade, and we find at the end of a perfect day the soul of a friend we've made" I am in motion |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful, i thank you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue -- this was so lovely and a tribute to what happens when kindred souls aspire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think you've written for many of us... I know I felt every line. *S* Beautiful! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Ohhh Sue, you shouldn't have, really... What? It wasn't for me? Oh... Well I still love it, as I do all of your poems Sue! Just do me one small favor? Don't ever stop writing... I don't think the world could handle the loss... I know we couldn't |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue...simply beautiful as always. Hope you are well. Hugs, Nancy ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A perfect connection...beautifuly described. Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, God Bless You, dearest friend, you are an inspiration to every one of us and your words always make it feel just like home here! (kiss on cheek) You are a friend in me forever, yay, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You write extremely well! Grover. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't think this could be any more beautiful or true |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Very lovely, Sue. hugs M |
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