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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 A January Sunset Across The Bay By Ethel_GG ~*~ You say I make you feel like a king I feel like a queen with happiness you bring With love we share we can face anything while both our hearts in sweet harmony sing With love bringing triump o'er each trial as we trod lifes road mile after mile Turning discouragement into a smile we are hand in hand all the while You are my stars up in the sky and give to me many reasons why You are the apple of my eye and the one who makes me sigh You are my first thought at daybreak when my eyes open and I awake The last at night before sleep o'ertakes and during my rest happy dreams you make ~*~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
YES you are!! my sentiments exactly, now if I can only see that sunset myself! Great write! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Craig. The sunset was taken this week one day. I love sunsets across the water.  Hugs  Ethel |
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richard taylor Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 136 |
What a lovely poem. I realy enjoyed it thanks for sharing richard |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh wow...this makes me want to fly down and visit! Or trade ya for some snow and cold?  Hugs YOU! In the midst of winter.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and may you always be the queen of your castle in your heart with your loving king bringing peace forever, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Ethel, to be in Florida right now... What a gorgeous poem and picture. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love thie Ethel....  always as beautiful as your heart and love for him...~~**~~ I lie awake at night |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"With love bringing triump o'er each trial as we trod lifes road mile after mile Turning discouragement into a smile we are hand in hand all the while" Ethel, you struck gold with this! Thank you. Enjoyed... ~Sadelite~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so romantic. I love it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...got me feeling jealous here.. you carry such a full heart...  you gotta teach me how ya do it! Dawn |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love is your reign and you always share your heart so tenderly. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
No one writes as well as you do of love. Jason |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
You, my friend, are the neighborhood romantic. It oozes from you honestly, setting a good example for all of the rest of us who haven't quite perfected the art of Love. Beautiful write, as always. McLean |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ethel?...this is truly beautiful, my friend... and, in my opinion, one of your best...smile Love it, my friend... hugs... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - lovely write, it's a nice feeling to know of these words... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful poem... what beautiful love. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richard, Nancy Noah Youngatheart :heart; Lauren You all are so sweet and I thank each of you. I appreciate ya'll so much, too. Hugs to each one of you, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sadie Julie Dawn Vandana Margherita I appreciate all of your replies very much. And, I thank each one of you. Hugs to you all, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jason McLean Vicky Bill suthern :heart Everybody, I'm sorry that I got behind in my replies and didn't thank each of you individually. I really do thank each of you and appreciate ya'll for reading my poem and for your nice replies. Hugs to each of you, Ethel |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Ethel...they're all right...the love just "oozes" out through your sweet, wonderful words. ::sigh:: Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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