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The Edge Of My Hand
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The Edge Of My Hand |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To be defined by the edge of a hand. To reach... And find only distance reaching back. Until there is no difference. Not even an edge remains. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How far can the reach go when accompanied by a thought? ~*~ Oh, now you've got me thinking, you have! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
My goodness, Eric, you do make me think with this one. I see you had the same effect on Sunshine. Wonderful thinker of a poem. Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc When I read this, all I can think to say is, yes!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ You enlarge the perimeter of this circle with a gracious offering of poetic thought~  Splendid~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...sounds so familiar to how i feel sometimes... wonderful way to state it |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
To reach... And find only distance reaching back. Well, you made me think, too, with this one.  Sometimes a couple is closer in distance than some who are standing right in front of each other....and still can't reach the other. Right? Hugs, Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always you offer tidbits that feast a banquet Eric. TD |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
well done! loved this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous poetry does, yay! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
from the edge there is a new beginning!...interesting suggestion here |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Chewing, Chewing, Chewing... My literal self thought of a blind person at first (I'm so honest, regardless of how it makes me seem simple!)... Then, I thought about the personal challenges in my own life in which these words strike a familiar tone... very good, dear! McLean |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Ahhh.. this, a sacred, beautiful breath of passion and life itself. It fills my mind as does fresh air fills my lungs. How delicious, this experience... What sensual magic you weave with words. Thank you for sharing your gentle, poetic brilliance. I love you, Moca |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
not even an edge remains When distance meets distance there is total fusion ..... this is what your wondrous words suggest to me, dear Eric. I love you. Margherita |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
my first feeling on this was incredible loneliness.... I'll keep pondering it though :-) "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
To reach... And find only distance reaching back. well you are inspiring me with your words... if I may return one for you later... thank you, M |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dearest One... You describe infinity so incredibly deliciously...as only you can. Sensual, delicate, thoughtful...you. Thank you...as always, it's a privilege. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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