Open Poetry #31 |
Will We Share Our Problems |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
you are always there for me When a happy smile I cease to wear my heart you seem to see My many moods come breaking through at times when I least expect My self control I work to have to keep my self respect My world I am living in here below has much worries and problems I might be better off if I just would not be trying to always help solve them But it seems to be that is how I am it may be too late to change If you will just promise to be there for me my thoughts I will attempt to rearrange So when my family and friends their burdens with me they will share If we will forever be there for each other together all problems we shall bear |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
This sounds like a prayer of thank you for being at your side.Always ging a helping hand and added strength when needed. Good one. Bon-Bon |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Bon-Bon. That's exactly what it was. Hugs Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"So when my family and friends their burdens with me they will share If we will forever be there for each other together all problems we shall bear Beautiful sweet lady~Much enjoyed. ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Nancy Lee. I appreciate you so much. Hugs Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel, the writing of your thoughts and feelings, just keeps getting better and better. Know I am here if you need an ear to bend...lol. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely lovely Ethel. Hugs. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Warm and tender thoughts expressed quite beautifuly! Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Ethel, nothing touches me more than this expression of gratitude you share so beautifully here. You value who is there for you. Together indeed all problems are solved. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
There for each other - that's certainly the way it should be! Nice poem |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Ethel for this beautiful expression of self feelings and gratitude....~P |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ethel~ You are such a sweet wonderful soul. I am glad I "know" you and can read your words. "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very expressive. I enjoyed this poem! Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smniles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you have a most loving and golden heart that everyone in your family must have too, yay, you haver a golden family, and may many happy blessings be shared between your loved ones forever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, thank you, my friend. I know that you will always be here for me. I appreciate it, too. . Thank you very much, Donna. You are so sweet. Hugs back to you. . Eric, thank you. That's very sweet of you to say. . Thank you so much, Margherita. You are such a sweet soul. I really do appreciate my friends and family, as well as all of my friends here....like you. . illusion, thank you very much. Yes, it's so great for people to be there for each other. . . I appreciate each one of you so much. Hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, choshi. That's very kind of you to say. . Thank you very much, Susan. It is very nice to know you, too. . Thank you, Grover. I'm really glad that you liked my poem. . Thank you, Noah. You are so sweet. I really appreciate you, my friend. . . I can't express how much I depend on all of you here at PIP. I appreciate each and every one of you so very much. Hugs to all of you, Ethel |
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