Open Poetry #31 |
It Still Reminds Me Of When |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
It Still Reminds Me Of When My mind went the places Neath the stars above It still reminds me of when My heart was falling in love I had never kept it secret Yes I knew you could tell It still reminds me of when My heart came out the shell Expressing our emotions Hoping feelings matched It still reminds me of when My heart became attached Fulfilling so many dreams Love giving us the need It still reminds me of when My heart and mind agreed Memories filling my mind Anytime its there to view It still reminds me of when My heart had fallen for you Forever in heart and mind All that was written above It still reminds me of when My heart had grown to love HopeĀ©2004 |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
You remind us when we all took that oh-so-long fall unique to each led us no closer to thr ground thanks ( I think for the reminder) Ahh well, much better to know the heart still bleeds than reach into a coal bin which you have obviously maintained fluidity "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
how sweet and romantic! It warmed my soul to read this, I always am a sucker for a good love poem and this was most definitly one of the better one's that I have read. So beautiful...sigh... ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know we can relate to one another here... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks Death .... so glad I can offer those reminders Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Bella thanks for wonderful reply , I was happy to be sharing the warmth ... yes I am an incurable romantic Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks so much Dixie , relate with you , yes and here are huge Hugs Hope |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
So very beautiful Hope! So nice to see you writing this way! |
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