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Listening Closely.......I Hear
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Listening Closely.......I Hear |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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The sun was brightly shining when I arose on this cool, clear day I love these days of winter here.... so peacefully shining, the sun, in such a loving way It seems to wear a big smile as if to say come out and enjoy me do you want to play I wonder if you are enjoying the beautiful sun where you are this morn I know you are somewhere out there beneath the big skies wishing to me your love could show Wait, I hear the birds singing way up high in the sky Are they bringing a message from you to me Listening closely I seem to hear so clearly the words, "I love you" Look, I think I see dark clouds coming into view I wonder if it will rain I know as you look into the skies in your heart you feel the same pain as I Only a few more days, my love then together you and I will be again Enjoying each other with the sun smiling at us or rain softly falling Regardless of what nature in all its wisdom may to us show Being together will be such joy no matter what else happens of this we surely know |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Ethel it sounds like your going to have some much needed time to catch up on all the days you've been apart... I hope you have the greatest time I'm sure, you will...  |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
What beautiful words of love, Ethel...so very romantic. You must be a very special lady to feel so deeply. Youngatheart |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Enjoying each other with the sun smiling at us or rain softly falling" ahhh...the truth of love's milieu...any will do....so well written...so nicely focused |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Well written, much enjoyed! Grover. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - so very soft and touching. At the present time I'm sitting in a blizzard, bah'ahhhhhhh..Waiting to go home where at least the sun shines... BC |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 so, so sweet |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks for the hug, Karilea. . . Thank you, Richy. We always enjoye our time together, and just being. . . Thank you, Youngatheart. I really appreciate your saying that. . . Thanks, steaven. You're right, it doesn't matter if the sun's shining or if it's raining, we love just being together. . . Thanks, Grover. I'm glad that you liked it. . . Bill, thanks for reading and replying. I hope that you didn't have any trouble getting home in the blizzard. . . Dawn, thank you. I'm very glad that you liked it. . . Ya'll are all so sweet. I really appreciate you all reading my stuff.  Heart hugs to you all, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Ethel, I'm so happy that you and Fary will see each other again this weekend or so, sweet friend, that's where you know the spring is coming with the birds singing happily of love with you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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