Open Poetry #31 |
Hemmed In |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~*~ Fragile the cross-stitch entwines weaving fine lines on white linen hemmed in around the edges boarders on the simple beauty tracing patterns in silken sway set aside in gentle folds only to unravel and let go. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What a beautiful poem to wrap yourself around with Loved this Bluesy |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
its a gentle way to unravel, even in doing so, maintains its class and beauty...just like you |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Kool write Blues...never been into "sewing" of any kind, though sometimes I wish I had gotten into quilt making... lots of designs I'd like to "quilt". jimmy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is always a time to unravel and let go excellent piece that made me think |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Beautifully written. Ah, those cross-stitches so beautiful and long lasting. Sadie |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
only to uravel and let go yes!!! let go let go, break the traditions, and live a little i was never one for the proper way, but then again u probably know that by now, blondielocks |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This seems a poem about the fabric of life, once a thread is pulled, the whole thing might unravel...but life has the power to rethread the needle, making mends to the tapestry possible. enjoyed reading it, Bluesy.... ________ice/ford ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very postive, encouraging and peaceful hopeful read...thankyou for sharing. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful work, lady!!! I like this metaphor very much. *S* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, I love to "cross-stitch" for real. I love the way you related it to life. Just beautiful writing, lady. Hugs Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
unravel it can always be sewn back together if need be right? you are gentle... hugsss ~~**~~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
only to unravel and let go. yes, a wonderful release. great work Ms Blues Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I'm still here reading, Bluesy, and not disappointed. And life is like a thread - so very delicate. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... good use of metaphor with touches of class intwined in the threads you left here for us to read.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bluesy - your thoughts weave within... BC |
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