Open Poetry #31 |
Waiting for the Red Light to Turn Green |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
It comes over me unexpected as rain sweeping over me subliminally sprinkling illusions as the red turns to green i play scenarios on the sky's revolving screen where you finally succumb to a silly girl's dream as we dance down the aisle, petals tossed for you and me and then i retrace the path of seduction that lured me, originally, to the flight of the freebird and the realization of my dream it comes over me and i kiss it tenderly like a child unclenches her fist that held life in captivity the butterfly released to the glorius green it comes over me and i remember i was blessed when i held you once, so i just let it be |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
What a warm and tender story that was... Thanks Michelle, I really like this soft side of you |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
how beautiful....so soft and delicate and at the same time screaming with emotions. I enjoyed it immensely. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and i remember i was blessed when i held you so i just let it be Kay sera sera, isn't that the way of it! Oh girlie, your sentiments reached into the very heart of me. Sweetly said, Michele~ |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i think the best thing i can do is "ditto" Bluesy......she said it perfectly... and so did you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! this aches in me, but it hurts so good |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
well done |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading everyone |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Another amazing write by you -- I identified with so much of this. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thaks iliana glad you stoppped in |
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