Open Poetry #31 |
Steady??? |
alan6501 Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 89PA |
STEADY??? Steady, can things ever really be truly steady?? No, there's alway this topsy turvy feeling and I'm moving ever so slightly within it. The wind is never merciful and will always do whetever the hell it pleases so I just deal with it and take things as they come. You must learn to move with things, or you'll be choking down the regrets as you are quickly left behind... **************************************************** Hi everyone! I haven't posted in forever but here is some food for thought or whatever you want to call it. It could be loads better, what do you guys think? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
alan6501 A good thoughtful piece. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Alan, this sounds what I was talking about in a senryu I wrote last week. Here it is if you want to take a look. Much enjoyed your thoughts. /pip/Forum88/HTML/000974.html |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
true dat |
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