Open Poetry #31 |
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Konrad – Shifting in Search |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Konrad – Shifting in Search ![]() I feel her now, looking back, reminiscing, exploring sensations that were left hanging in warm, moist air, almost tangible to her touch, and I sense her reaching, delving into what was left behind, there, in the blues and greens, and mist, as if by eyes blinded, she wants to believe she will see into a past, to be wary of future steps into sand, where prints are enfolded into moments past time. She looks beyond the waters, past the verdant lush of all that would overgrow misfortunate, pain, and weariness, she peers into the mists… seeking, knowing I am but a thought away. ~*~ In climbing the tower as if hoping to find a new perspective in looking outward, now, as well as inward, questioning where my own ponderings will lead me, as the awful losses lay heavy… death taking more than its toll… while inner needs outweigh love, and resolutions still beg this quest. ~*~ I think I hear her, now, whispering to my soul… Follow your intuition, step ever forward… I shall always be here, listening for you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"In climbing the tower as if hoping to find a new perspective in looking outward, now, as well as inward, questioning where my own ponderings will lead me, as the awful losses lay heavy… death taking more than its toll… while inner needs outweigh love, and resolutions still beg this quest." Love this Karilea..I was wondering when you would continue this story. Very much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Most enjoyable, love the mystique of this post....the thoughts... |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I think I hear her, now, whispering to my soul… Follow your intuition, step ever forward… I shall always be here, listening for you. Oh, Karilea, it's so good to see Konrad back. I really love this one. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Even though I may have missed some of your series, I think this is a fascinating write even on its own. Brilliant Karilea! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea There is a touch of magic in this beauty! ![]() |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This takes me back to a time I once knew. Love it Karilea and the image too. ![]() M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
An intriguing write! |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
( nodding head) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A captivating write with much to think about. I love the way the images blend with emotions. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I feel her now, looking back, reminiscing, exploring sensations that were left hanging in warm, moist air, almost tangible to her touch, and I sense her reaching, delving into what was left behind, there, in the blues and greens, and mist, as if by eyes blinded, she wants to believe she will see into a past, to be wary of future steps into sand, where prints are enfolded into moments past time. ================================= love the chemistry and connection you are conjuring up here with this. A mix of anticipation and haunting allure. the moth wants more. ![]() Well I cant say what I might believe ... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lovely unfolding of a soul....enjoyed by me! |
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