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Open Poetry #31

Love's first bliss

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-02-13 08:31 PM

Silent
Jingling
Wafted by pillor and post
Missing intended
Hitting
An idea
That you hadn't considered
Suitable
For purpose

Eyes meeting across a crowded room
And everyone's eyes
40 - 40
Inches
That is

Focussing on a person
Frightened
Turning away
For glasses
To wear
Or drink
Refreshing your vision
To your dream

Misting gently
Across your eyes
To proposition
Your brain

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2004-02-13 11:15 PM

Hey Dave

I really liked this one. It's nice to read your words again.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-02-14 12:04 PM

Dave,
"For glasses
To wear
Or drink"
I like the way you did that. And the misting over bit-nicely done. I like the poem.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-02-16 04:23 PM

thanks Sue and Pilgrim

Dave

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