Open Poetry #31 |
No Child of Mine (for eor's domestic violence challenge) |
muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
the perspective i wrote this from was that of the "neighbor" who lives next door to the abuser/abused. so many people ignore the "cry for help" because they think its not their responsibility, or they are too scared to get involved. this particular poem shows the indifference being taken over by the fear. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~ I see their dirty little faces smiling as they’re digging up the bulbs Id only just planted a week ago. How those children run wild no shoes, snotty noses and all that noise bellowing from their semi toothless mouths. I only wish someone would come and collect them and let my garden rest, but I should mind my own business they’re no child of mine. Soon enough they'll be forced inside, with the curtains drawn and the shouting shaking the windows. Those bruised little legs know how brutal "welcomes" can be when quitting time runs late at the factory and ten dollars have to get you through the week. but I should mind my own business they’re no child of mine. At night with my window opened just enough to let the cool breeze in; so often does it smuggle with it the crying of unloved hearts in tiny little chests, breathing heavily from exhaustion. How hard the work must be to raise the hand to the wounded, the abandoned. but I should mind my own business they’re no child of mine. I’ll just close my eyes and hope that dreaming will find the peace needed from my long day of peeping through the parting of my drapes. And when morning comes in anxious hours I wait to see their dirty little faces smiling as they’re digging up the bulbs, wishing somebody would take them away..... but I should mind my own business they’re no child of mine. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This was heartbreaking Dawn There's nothing worse then poor innocent chilren being mistreated. Thanks for writing this Dawn. It really gives a great message. I hope you have a Happy Valentines Day! Richy |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is heartbreaking. Over the years I've had neighbor children I've worried about, but if you never see or hear anything, you just have suspicions, what can you do? Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Great message in here, and when in this position, it is really hard to know what the right thing to do is, until you look into those children's eyes. Challenge well met for sure! Kudos |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Wow. This is beautiful and heartfelt and really touching. And so sadly true. Wonderful and powerful peice! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this rips me up |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very very sad Dawn. 'Suffer the little children'.... Challenge well met. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
muted, I'm glad you took the challenge. You did a fine job showing that perspective. Unfortunately, it is so true. All was great, but one line stood out for me in particular: "How hard the work must be to raise the hand to the wounded, the abandoned." nice writing... sadie |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Poignant... all to true! Grover. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Dawn this is a very sad poem...but you have got across to us the reader exactly the message that was intended....so you have achieved your desire well....this speaks the truth about domestic violence and the helplessness felt by doing nothing... Well written.... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
when others see and do nothing, th abuser gets more confident and believes that no one sees, no one would believe one who is trying to stop it all, the abuser excludes, isolates, lies about, yells, breaks things, throws things, hurts the young when they tell one or cry for one. i have been there, not only from my own child hood, no one would believe you, but the divide and conquer games, all to intimidate and place fear in one who only wants to stop. beatings, drugged, the extent to what they do to protect self and they should be protecting family, drugs and alcohal do cruel things to people and in turn they do cruel things. i am not allowed as i tried to stop it. even as obvious as it is and others who did call, which are now excluded also, because of neighbors or others see or hear. never making a call or report. they gain strengh and more lives are ruined. people dont know what it is like to only want what is right, and play into the abusers lies and denial and cruel justifications, and making one look as if it was them, even saying things to kids to say to protect abuser abusers keep the abused close. push away mothers family no school even keep one wasted to be as them. life sucks and it has to stop. not all abused become abusers some as me want to break cycle and stop others as them keep it going as no one shall have more or better and need to hurt as they did. instead of realizing the pain and damage. and not wanting another to feel it. sad and cruel and brings so much sorrow to me. i will never give up and will find a way to stop it another form of terrorism lives in our homes and teaches fear hate anger lies blame another especially one they hurt. please if anyone sees and knows just make a call write a letter save a child unjustice and unfairness has to stop or this world will never have love and peace respect humanityt integrity trust love for all colors or mankind anything godly My spirit will rise |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
This is familiar when I was growing up......but we had neighbors who didn't care. |
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