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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-02-13 11:25 AM

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upon the still
   of empty nights,
   astride idle thoughts

   wishing of stars ...

visions to life
   where each can feel
   such burning desires
   becoming real

         lay your hands on me

against all will
   my endless plights,
   their immortal thoughts

   expectating ...

stop mindless strife
   as bodies heal
   in touching the soul,
   stimulating ...

         lay your hands

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One's outlook can be another's expression.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-02-13 11:31 AM

upon the still
   of empty nights,
   astride idle thoughts

   wishing of stars ...

visions to life
   where each can feel
   such burning desires
   becoming real

         lay your hands on me
Wow, this just flows and I love where it leads.
very well done!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-02-13 12:21 PM

fear is a powerful thing

it keeps people from touching

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-02-13 02:03 PM

sigh....this is one of your best Craig
very inspiring have missed seeing your name here....

big ole bear hugssssss'

Me~

~~**~~

There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-02-13 02:52 PM

stop mindless strife
   as bodies heal
   in touching the soul,
   stimulating ...

         lay your hands

Pick the time, i'll pick the place........
we will heal our booboos together as one, be my bandaid and i'll be your tourniquet

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2004-02-13 06:13 PM

Craig, this touches me. Beautifully done.
Hope you have a nice Valentines Day.
Sandra

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-02-13 07:34 PM

A perfect poem! Grover.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2004-02-13 07:38 PM

nice read

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-02-16 04:34 AM

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2004-02-17 11:54 AM

upon the still
of empty nights,
astride idle thoughts

So very nicely, Craig~

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