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Inspired Whimsy
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Inspired Whimsy |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
you-- silent like midnight-- slithered into my heart attached yourself onto the cusps of the valves those which kept me alive-- made yourself an integral part of my life then you (foolish wicked bitter you) ripped yourself away left me helpless hopeless lifeless dying, simply, for a lack of you you left gaping holes in my heart bleeding and raped by the infection of jilted love too soon lost take advantage and leave love 'em leave 'em the jist of your philosophy i will overcome you bandage my heart with my own wisdom my own courage my own need to believe in something bigger than you-- to believe in myself Enjoy what you can, endure what you must. -Goethe |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
a fun title, interesting lines.  |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
love 'em leave 'em the jist of your philosophy whoa,this whole poem,just struck me your amazing never forget that |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Very expressive and neatly penned. Garfield |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
"Whimsy" is a cool word...I enjoyed your word selections and organization here, but most of my happy comes from your initial word..."Whimsy"... McLean |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WickedBP - Quite a write -- quite a whimsy! |
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