This Thingamajig We Call Love

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Open Poetry #31

This Thingamajig We Call Love

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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0 posted 2004-02-12 12:38 PM

This Thingamajig We Call Love

This thingamajig we call love,
Can lift one to heights undreamed of,
We treasure it each Valentine's,
With poetry dressed to the nines.

We seek the perfect; "I love you,"
Which speaks the feelings we hold true,
An ode which we might gift our sweet--
--A sentiment that is complete.

Yet there is naught that is as real,
As the yearning that we two feel,
There's no narrative I could write,
Which in my heart would seem as right,

As a simplistic, "I love you,"
For it's to thee that my heart flew.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2004-02-12 12:50 PM

good piece...love can be flashy and it can be simple...personally I'd take either one right now.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 2004-02-12 12:58 PM

psst, Dixie - will you take "cheap"? lol

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-02-12 01:04 PM

Ahhh what a lovely genuine heartfelt Valentine Kevin.
Much enjoyed the read today.
~Valentine Hugs, Nancy~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-02-13 12:02 PM

What a sweet gesture-she'll love it.
Sadie

Martie

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5 posted 2004-02-13 12:14 PM

Seems so honest and heart felt...enjoyed!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

6 posted 2004-02-13 01:07 AM

Hey Shakespeare,
   I love this piece. Its beautiful.
    Ribbits and Ribbits
         :-)

Pssst. Yes I am still up yet. :-)

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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7 posted 2004-02-13 01:11 PM

Amen! *S* How very beautiful! *S*

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