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Open Poetry #31

Buds of Spring Cleaning Up

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-02-12 10:28 AM

old leaf floats earthward

water's hungry torrent snarls

patient sea awaits

©2004 by icebox

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-02-12 10:47 AM

icebox
I like it, I like it.

Martie

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California

2 posted 2004-02-12 10:48 AM

icebox

I can see this in my minds eye. Thank you for the painting.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

3 posted 2004-02-12 10:59 AM

"old leaf floats earthward

water's hungry torrent snarls

patient sea awaits"

This was great...I love to personalize sometimes (alright...all the time...geez)

with that in mind..I think I best fit the water's hungry torrent snarling....hopefully that is just a "today" thing....

love ya Icy!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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