Teen Poetry #7 |
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Thank You (please read and comment!) |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry ![]() |
THANK YOU! T hanks for everything you always do. H ave I ever told you there is no better friend than you? A lways telling me your secrets and speaking your mind; N ever realizing how every move you make is so kind. K nowing I sometimes forget to say “Thanks”, Y ou never hold it against me, never lose your grace. O nly now it is time for me to return the favor (so…) U ltimately thank you for every moment with you I will always savor. I would like to dedicate this poem to my best friend Valerie! Thanks so much for everything! |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I hope you share this with her, this is what friendship is all about........ ~~**~~ Walking with bare feet among a tapestry of words, each woven thread, awakening the soul ~~**~~ |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
This was vary creative I don't see many things like this here any more grate post and thanks for the read...keep writing when you live you begin to die |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
I like this. It's very sweet to dedicate a poem to a friend. -Ixxi "Where paper cuts, and bloody hands, In the middle, they will meet" |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Thanks everybody so much for your replies! ~Alli~ |
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Fleur Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 103 |
This poem, is so cute! ![]() *Fleur* |
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Fariegirl Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 147 |
Good ~*Faries exist.*~ |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
truly i loved it ,it was soo real and soo true ,,it made me feel soo proud to meet people everyday on here in this wonderful website and in this wonderful world ....like feeling i am alive ,,well thanks for this wonderful poem... ::^love^:: |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Thanks all you guys for your comments, I really appreciate it! *Alli* |
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xno4everx Junior Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 14NY |
i did these kind of poems when i was in 4th grade..sorry not my type... //..Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one..\\ |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
It's okay that you didn't really like my poem, xno4everx. It's your opinion and I respect it. Thanks for commenting. ~Alli~ |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Alli: This is sweet...I did this to a poem once about a guy I liked named N I C K Great Poem! Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Glad you enjoyed it Lisa...thanks for commenting! ~Alli~ |
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