Breathless and White in the silence

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Teen Poetry #7

Breathless and White in the silence

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-06-30 05:50 PM

Breathless and White in the silence

sweating earth listens closely
to the beat of a breathless scream
and the night condemns so priestly
as if it controls the light's seams.

Second chance memories invade
thrusting truth into our hearts,
but we taste our bitterness pervade
and we lose hope in the last star.

Even the deepest emerald
of a summer's tree
will fade away soon in the
curse of winter's freeze.

Let all be lost to pictures
In frames of years gone by,
Let all be lost to rapture
In the memory of goodbye

Are you Leaving me behind?

Even the deepest emerald
of a summer's tree
will fade away soon in the
curse of winter's freeze.
Be my fresh summer leaf
of burned love,
Leave the smoking heat
to what we're made of.

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-30 06:01 PM

Wow, I love it! I like how it sounds when I read it. I just like it!!!!
*Thumbs Up*

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-06-30 06:50 PM

well done,,,,i enjoyed reading this,,, i feel like your poems are more like a story than a poem,,but i love them all keep posting please i would love to hear more,,

love and respect

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

3 posted 2004-06-30 09:55 PM

Your words never cease to enthrall me.

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2004-07-01 09:58 PM

nice ending.
I wasn'truely captured by it, until that point.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

5 posted 2004-07-02 08:20 AM

thanks guys

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