Teen Poetry #7 |
F.A.K.E. PARENTS |
XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
She goes through her day laughing and smiling She gets good grades- she has many friends But no one could ever guess that she was dying She wanted her parents to be proud They didnt care about her- abusing her whenever they can She ignored them- not even making a sound Her shelter wasn't her room; no it was school that was the one place where they couldnt hurt her On weekends, she spent her time at friend's houses She was usually loud and funny But when her parents were around, she was nothing but a mouse She wanted more than drunk parents who didnt even care She wanted true ones who would love her forever Her smiles were fake Her tears at night were real Every birthday, she only wished for real parents for heavens sake! So, next time you see a "perfect" person Just stop a minute and tell yourself- No one is perfect- theres a good chance its all F.A.K.E XxnoraxX ps.) nope this isnt about me I just felt like writing it- i would love it if you commented on this |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
"So, next time you see a "perfect" person Just stop a minute and tell yourself- No one is perfect- theres a good chance its all F.A.K.E" I loved this poem but that part was really good. I liked it alot because i have looked at someone and wished that i was like them because they seem to have a "perfect" life. This was a great poem!! smiles |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I know that girl. She's fifty now, and there is a kind of peace she has found, mainly within herself, for herself. But so has Pearl Harbor. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Thanks for replying guys! XoXo, XxnoraxX No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3 |
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EagletonDiva Member
since 2006-01-11
Posts 107 |
A lessoned learned myself through my life. I grew thinking the popular girls were all that and I was nothing, when in reality we were all the same. Children of drunks. Praying for the pain to go away. Sad |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
I really liked this I thought it was very interesting, especially the last verse. All though it isn't about you(it isn't is it?), I can some what relate to it. Very good write xD Belinda x x |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Thanks so much for replying guys- i rly appriciate it XoXo, XxnoraxX No ones perfect;just perfect for each other-<3 |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
yeah one of my friends are like that perfect in school but her home life is hell Where your heart lays is where you belong. [This message has been edited by latteaddict213 (02-20-2006 05:56 PM).] |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
thanks for replying-luv hearing from you XoXo, |
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intention Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 59New Delhi, INDIA |
m rely sorry i got it late ... i was going through ur old posts n found this one as the best.. its rely amazing... rely wonderful... keep posting Love me for who i m |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
my old name :] lol thx 4 replying your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - P!ATD! |
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Junebug Junior Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 40earth |
wow i like totally love this one cause i kinda get how it feels....only not.....things are like a mess for me right now....but when i'm around people n stuff i act like nothings wrong...but at night i like cry myself to sleep....this totally rocks, I love it!!!!!!! the only part i dont connect with is the parents thing...my parents arent fake.... |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
lol thx for replying junebug glad u liked it :] ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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:.flower.: New Member
since 2006-05-25
Posts 5 |
wow, that was good keep on writing _flower_ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved the title... and it is sad that so many young people feel this way and have to deal with parents who can't see what they are/ or are not doing for their children. M |
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