the other side of the greenery

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Teen Poetry #7

the other side of the greenery

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2004-03-26 06:40 PM

So...its a beaitiful day, when its not.
And my blood has come to a stand still cool liquid in my veins.
Come wade inside me.
No doubt you'll be refreshed.

My darkness is so bright, and my smile has never felt more geniue.
The hearts I sport on my charm bracelet are bright and healthy.
An embrace that shocks me back to life.
(try not to expect, but life is worth the risks, none the less.)

Its funny how I thought I had the losing numbers, but later when I looked...I realized I was already a millionare.
Because my coins, though few, shine like no other. Don't bother me with the complexities.
I'm off to my play ground of dreams.

loner187
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

1 posted 2004-03-26 08:10 PM

Oh my God, this is so good, Lexy. I've only been here a few months, already always love your work, and this one is no exception. Everything flows so nicely together. Perfectly written. I feel you, man, I feel you. How life can not get any sweeter.

"Love doesn't make the world go 'round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile."
-Franklin P. Jones

a123
Member

since 2004-03-27

Posts 72

2 posted 2004-04-02 08:04 AM

This is an amazing poem its so positive and optimistic.

btw thks fr ur comments on my poem tht really felt gd.

bye
hope 2 read more ..

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2004-04-03 05:59 PM

Wow. This is so refreshing from the depressing stuff on here. This hit just the right cord in me, and I needed it. Thank you.
This one's going in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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