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Teen Poetry #7

A Ray of Light

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2004-03-22 09:38 AM

Thru the piercin darkness,
Nothin is seen, nothing perceived,
No images viewed,none interpretable.

But it's in this gloom,
That a light is most visible,
Cos rite thru does it pierce,
Changing minds,making things real.

Turning illusions into realities,
And helpin to realize dreams,
That the dark has long subdued.

Now the impossible can occur,
And the neglected,hugged close,
Cos of this light,
Yes this very light,
Everything is now made new.

What's this light?
Oh Just look within,
And if truth is there,
Then there's the light,
If love's there,
Then there's the light.

But if within u do see traces of hate,
And of things that make this world,
A tad bit more inhabitable,
Then no light dwells therein,
Cos light and dark,truly cannot mingle.

But fret not,
Cos it's in this utter dark,
That the Light of HE,
Is most bright...
And when even the dimmest ray is let in,
The bright light that Jesus is,
Will pierce the wilderness of our souls,
And of the perishing world we dwell.

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-03-22 04:20 PM

I like this. The point you are trying to get across is easy to read, and understand, if that makes any sense. lol Amazing poem.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-03-24 09:52 PM

Hey, nice to see you posting here again.
I really like this one alot, it's..soothing.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

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