Teen Poetry #7 |
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Disguised Death |
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infinite disaster Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 69Illinois |
Okay, tell me what you think but please be gentle ... haha. I haven't written in a long time and this just came to me after I took a nap. ![]() You screamed in ecstasy From the pain I felt Enjoy the destruction of myself A circus I am not Show tricks to fool everyone But you cannot hide In you shadow of disguise I am you clown You are the ringmaster Control the would around me Memories consumed with pain You cannot hide from me Rub salt on every wound Satisfied from my screams The useless fights To protect myself You walk away Smile to youself and say "Do not hide from the truth For they are the only ones That can save you" Every truth has been every lie Surrounded by empitness Call Death upon you For all you bring is pain But I cannot For suddenly I understand You are Death |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Glad you decided to start postin again. I like this one a lot. I usually get my best poems after wakiing up from a nap too, or else right before i go to bed. Awesome poem. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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a deer in lifes headlites Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 23 |
hey this was good. keep posting |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hmmm...dark, nice. - River sleep my precious slumber |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
this needs to go back for some more reads... wow. so straight forward but still with great imagery. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
Dark and kinda twisted...my favorite...nie write, I look forward to seeing more. Jen Everything gets better in the end, and if it's not better, it's probably not the end. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Excellent write! Simple, I like that. Thanks for sharing. W.W. |
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