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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
Morning come Morning rise Bringing in the sun Soon you will die. Forever you want Want you always need need that love love that always sees. Wind is blowing Blowing away the dust Dust accumulating Accumlating to the storm. The storm burrows Burrows in the deepest realms Realms of Hell it churns Churns into the everlasting death. Death comes quickly Quickly without you You missed my eyes Eyes that weapt. I cried for centuries Centuries you were never there There you held me Me, who could never love. You left quickly Quickly you said goodbye Goodbye comes again tomorrow Tomorrow you will die. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
"Wind is blowing Blowing away the dust Dust accumulating Accumlating to the storm." this was awesome. I really liked it, especially the way you used the last word again in the following line. Very.... unique. It made it stand out. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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