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Teen Poetry #7
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thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23
Posts 125
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0 posted 2004-03-15 11:19 PM


blankly describe
a swelling tear
hopelessly define
indwelling fear

Endlessly explain
Suffering and cost
Mindless and in vain
To think upon the lost

No way to speak of
death without tears
No way to think of
hope without fear

Amazing how simple
It's Incredible how much
Our waves seem to ripple
and hearts reap the costs
© Copyright 2004 Adam Wolf - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-03-16 11:25 PM

I like the ending the best. The poem as a whole was awesome too, but the ending, i think, made it stand out a lot, atleast to me. Very nice.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling
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