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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-03-03 07:08 AM

You won’t let your emotions show,
But that is expected.
So I’ll show them for you.

You do not cry,
When you’ve been hurt,
You just accept it,
And live with the scar forever.
So I shall cry for you.

You face is like stone,
Even when you’re dying inside.
Even when you just want to scream
But you hold it back, and bottle it up.
So I shall scream for you.

Even when you’re crazed with anger,
You simply sit there, quietly seething,
But in your mind, you’re losing it.
So I shall lose it for you.

I would change the world,
So you would be happy,
But it isn’t in my power,
All I have is my love,
My heart, my soul,
All of ME. For YOU.

"Pain is just weakness escaping the body."

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

1 posted 2004-03-03 10:27 AM

I really liked this one, Staci. Had a lot of emotion in it. Good job.

~J.Lynn

*¤§¤*You are born helpless...and you die helpless...*¤§¤*

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

2 posted 2004-03-14 11:14 AM

i loved this poem...it was wonderful.If my boyfriend was like that,id fall apart because i wouldnt know what to do.Good Write Spine Grinder

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-03-14 12:12 PM

I loved this.

~Vampire Kisses

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

4 posted 2004-03-14 01:20 PM

Thanks you three, I'm glad you liked this.

"And my heart still pumps twice as fast whenever you walk by. Cause I still love you."~ Blindside

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

5 posted 2004-03-15 05:32 AM

i love this @#%*#&% poem the emotion is desplayed in such a powerfull way grate job....... going into my library thanks for the read and keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

6 posted 2004-03-15 05:33 AM

i love this @#%*#&% poem the emotion is desplayed in such a powerfull way grate job....... going into my library thanks for the read and keep writing

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2004-04-05 11:55 PM

Beatiful

Juju

Ixxi
Member

since 2004-01-02

Posts 77
England

8 posted 2004-04-06 11:34 AM

I loved this, it reminds me of one of my friends only too well. This is going into my library.

-Ixxi

"Where paper cuts, and bloody hands, In the middle, they will meet"
- Funeral For A Friend

Ixxi
Member

since 2004-01-02

Posts 77
England

9 posted 2004-04-06 11:37 AM

Can I just add that this is the first poem that I have considered good enough to put into my library!

"Where paper cuts, and bloody hands, In the middle, they will meet"
- Funeral For A Friend

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

10 posted 2004-04-08 08:03 AM

Thanks everyone, I'm glad you liked this.

"I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

11 posted 2004-04-08 07:12 PM

All I can say is... WOW! I loved it!

~Alli~

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