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This is for you |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
I'll hold your hands through the good times and the bad forget all those depressing memories you seem to have remember only our times together for they will be endless this thing I offer you is love, and it is the length of forever This thing I offer is trust to a spanse greater than the horizons I offer you the love you've always dreamt of yet you must reach reach out beyond those confining walls of the past into the future I'd give it all to you if you'd only step out of that grey into the light Your eyes are the surreal skies of my freedom in which my heart soars yet again I must ask of you more than the simple acceptance of me you must love as I do, push along this path as I do, and grow as I do for nothing less will do, I am struggling to pursue the truth Come along with me and together we will rewrite history Together. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i enjiyed reading this very much "So what befalls the flawless? |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This poem was AWESOME! This one is def. going into my library. Good work, thanks for the read! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
I LOVE the fact that I know how you feel.  Wonderful job of putting all that love is into words. -Lioness |
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Strider612 Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46Alabama, United States of America |
Nice job on this one. You make your point well. Precise and concise. |
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*bleeding 4 eternity* Junior Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 10Alabama, U.S. |
nice job. i really enjoyed it. |
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