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Teen Poetry #7

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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-02-23 07:11 AM

Look inside,
And see your own
Reflected
Disappointment.
It means NOTHING.
Your face has been blank,
For so long it seems.
Your self-inflicted wounds,
Never seem to heal,
And you cry.
God you cry.
Like a storm,
Those tears rain down,
Flooding your world,
Until NOTHING remains.
Just the fog in your mind.
A fog so thick,
You’ve finally lost your way.
There is no indication,
Of where you are to go,
So you wander.
You wander through your mind,
Looking for the NOTHING,
That you’re destined to find.

"Pain is just weakness escaping the body."

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2004-02-23 10:03 AM

This poem is REALLY good. It's going in my library. I espically like the last line, it was the icing on the cake. Good work! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-02-23 06:01 PM

Wow, i agree. the ending was amazing, it really completed the poem. I'm adding this.

~kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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