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Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2004-02-22 06:56 AM

Hey everyone here is my latest poem that i have completed. It didnt take much time to write because it all seemed to flow onto the paper so it might not be as good as some of my others but enjoy none the less.

Wanting
Wishing
Needing
three meaningful words that I am feeling

Wanting that special girl
that I would move heaven and earth to be my world.
Wanting to be with her day and night
because when shes on my mind I feel everything is alright

Wishing for that chance
a chance to be the one she thinks of when it comes to romance
Wishing that i could tell her all of this
and make believe her believe that love can be filled with hapiness

Needing to express what I feel
because deep down my emotions couldn't be more real
Needing that special someone
that's always on my thoughts causing the wanting, wishing, and needing!!

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2004-02-22 05:30 PM

It just works out that way sometimes, when the poems write themselves. Nice, isn't it? This was very sweet--I hope you find her soon!

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-02-22 11:52 PM

Wow. I have read a lot of your stuff, and this is one of my favorites. I hope that she hears you, and you get her soon. This poem was really amazing.

~Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

3 posted 2004-02-26 08:30 AM

thanks for the wonderful comments so far. I'm glad that you enjoy my work!

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2004-02-27 02:53 AM

another amazing poem...
its excelent when the words practically write themselves on the paper isnt it???
hope you get together with your girl soon....
good luck and GO FOR IT....
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????

pammy
Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 50
California

5 posted 2004-02-28 07:30 PM

This is an awesome write and the first one of yours that i have read...buti enjoyed it..
i know how you feel when you have so many things you want to say to that specail someone tho you havent found them yet...
good job...i have posted a new one if youwish to respond to it...hope to hear from you

~*Pammy*~
“The brave may not live for long,
but the sheltered never live at all”

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