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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Your look is louder Than your spoken words, And your kiss tells me even more, Than your thoughts. You tell me everything, With a single touch. “I love you, I miss you, I want you, I NEED you.” That small act of love, Means more to me, Than any material thing You could ever give me. My thoughts, My eyes, My dreams, My kiss, My love, My everything, It’s all for you. You’ve captured my soul, I beg of you, To never let go, To never take away, My happiness, My sunshine, My smile. Without you, I’d be broken, I’m tired of the shadows, It’s time to leave them - Forever... "Pain is just weakness escaping the body." |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Take me with you. Beautifully written. Im glad you have escaped the darkeness. ~Vampire Kisses  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
Great job!! it was a sweet poem |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Nice work. Very delicate. I liked the form, too. Good job  **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"I love you, I miss you, I want you, I NEED you." These words remind me of a song... Anyways, I absolutely loved this poem! Great Job!!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
I know exactly how you feel.. Love is one crazy feeling but once you know you're in love and the person loves you back, it's incredible. Awesome write, I enjoyed and it knew from the beginning exactly the emotion going into it. Nice job...I enjoyed it. "They say that truth will set you free, but then so will a lie. It all depends if you're trying to get to the promised land or just trying to get by." |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thanks, I'm glad you all liked this one, it's been awhile since I've written something good, that I actually like, so it's nice to hear that you guys like it. So thanks. "I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park |
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LegalSecret69 Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69Virginia |
very well written, and i agree..this was delicate...gentle. It was really good. Great job! |
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Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
"i'm tired of the shadows" beauiful line....this was great,very inspiring too. Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved. |
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