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Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19
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From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-02-10 03:09 PM



i find no rest in sleep for it is no longer a peaceful thing to me
can't close my eyes without seeing your face
your dreaming hazel eyes haunt my every thought
every second with out you i am diying
my love for you prevails with the strength of the gods
i suffer dad by day, hour by hour, second by second
my heart explodes with pandemonium of emotion
feelings soar and overwhelm me
does it mean that the love is true when it comes with such a burden of pain?
is it this most horrific lonelyness that has become my fate?
you see me with your sight but your heart is blind to me
i want no one else but you
need no one else, think of no one elses, care of no one else
i am just as blind as you but i am blind to the world
with out you it is dead to me
the weight of sorrow is so great to bare upon my most weakest shoulders but i will do it for the rest of my years
love is a plague i dare not run from
it follows me whereever i go with embracing arms that swallow me whole and spit me out with a fatal rejection
this is the blessed and cursed life i am lead to live
i would have it no other way


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lauren03
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 64
oh, usa
1 posted 2004-02-10 08:19 PM


um, ya do you really like this person or is it someone your just dealing with? It kinda sounds like you have mixed feelings, kind of a dark rythm to it too but I caught onto the feeling. good write but you might want to clean up some of the spellings.
Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19
Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket
2 posted 2004-03-03 10:21 PM


Yeah I know...I wrote it so fast I wasnt thinking...
I_dont_know_me
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since 2003-12-08
Posts 48
UK, Cymru
3 posted 2005-01-24 08:47 AM


this was written a long time ago but i thougth id reply anyway bcos i really liked it xx
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