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My love for you
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My love for you |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket 
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i find no rest in sleep for it is no longer a peaceful thing to me can't close my eyes without seeing your face your dreaming hazel eyes haunt my every thought every second with out you i am diying my love for you prevails with the strength of the gods i suffer dad by day, hour by hour, second by second my heart explodes with pandemonium of emotion feelings soar and overwhelm me does it mean that the love is true when it comes with such a burden of pain? is it this most horrific lonelyness that has become my fate? you see me with your sight but your heart is blind to me i want no one else but you need no one else, think of no one elses, care of no one else i am just as blind as you but i am blind to the world with out you it is dead to me the weight of sorrow is so great to bare upon my most weakest shoulders but i will do it for the rest of my years love is a plague i dare not run from it follows me whereever i go with embracing arms that swallow me whole and spit me out with a fatal rejection this is the blessed and cursed life i am lead to live i would have it no other way |
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lauren03 Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 64oh, usa |
um, ya do you really like this person or is it someone your just dealing with? It kinda sounds like you have mixed feelings, kind of a dark rythm to it too but I caught onto the feeling. good write but you might want to clean up some of the spellings. |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
Yeah I know...I wrote it so fast I wasnt thinking... |
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I_dont_know_me Junior Member
since 2003-12-08
Posts 48UK, Cymru |
this was written a long time ago but i thougth id reply anyway bcos i really liked it xx |
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