Teen Poetry #7 |
faces...... who am i really |
aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
People think they know who i am but in truth they only know a face that i put on whilst im in public only a few people will ever truly see who i am for real and know what im actually going through these people are few and far between even my family see a face they have no idea who i amreally honestly even i dont know sometimes......... this was written whilst i was having a major identity crisis and i didnt know how else to get any of my feelings out and off my chest...... |
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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England |
Poetry is allways your best bet, i liked it well written. C.J |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Very well written!! Your right not everyone sees the real and its hard at times. If you want to know how i see you then i see you as one of god's heaven sent angels that has beauty of a princess and a heart of gold. Keep smiling hun something will work out!! Hugs, Chris |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thanks for the replies...... heaven sent angel....... that is a new one.... thanks chris.... i more or less get called a lil' devil..... dunno why tho... thanks again Mel this is me.... like it or not.... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I like it. Its about a problem everyone or at least I did has. Nice write -GIS Why live for gold when you can be happy? |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
I liked it, nice job. |
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