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Winters Fire for you
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Winters Fire for you |
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EverRuss Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 66Indiana |
The outside, A haze of dense gray Arisen over the fresh snow Pale, white, soft in color Harsh, is whipping cold winds This kiss from I to you, warms Uncorupted by the outside This fire burns inside, melting Turning all hopes, desires, a real Through the eternal darkness, of the harsh winter I see your face, Ruby eyes Cutting through the rich entrapment of your beauty Your form takes place among the outlines Of hope, of longing A transparent ache screams Echos through the night Your heart has struck a spark, My fire rages for you. If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
not bad, keep writing, I'm not sure if i understood the main part of it though... ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I understand what you're trying to say...atleast I think I do.  I like this alot...keep posting!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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