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Teen Poetry #7

Words

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2004-01-24 10:53 PM

I never wanted –
To
F
A
L
L
in love with you,
But still I did.
Why? I don’t know…
How? I’m not sure…

I never wanted –
To
L…E...A...V...E...
You,
But still I did.
Why? I don’t know…
How? I’m not sure…

I look at the pictures,
And see happy faces,
Completely in love,
And I remember the day
Those pictures were taken.
And I remember the warmth of your body,
Embracing my own.
And I remember -
The happiness your company brought me.
I never thought, at the time,
That it would turn into something like…this.

Just words on a screen.
But those words,
Are how I feel,
Inside my head,
Inside my heart.
It’s the best way,
That I can describe,
What’s going through my mind.
How confusing.

"Pain is just weakness escaping the body."

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

1 posted 2004-01-25 11:33 AM

i felt this one is so much diffrent to ur other stuff! is it just me or! i dont know i really really enjoyed it though!
~Emma~

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-01-26 04:54 PM

I loved it, it is beautiful. I can totally realate, to the first part especially! I fell in love with someone that I knew i shouldnt have, and never wanted to, and i used to wonder how, and why, How i fell in love with such a jerk, and why. I really liked it! Hope to hear more.
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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