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ascending_ecstasy Member
since 2004-01-21
Posts 102 |
The night of previous.... Twisting problems Ascending below Heading for the sun Drink the essence Essence of the sole Let it leave Like spirit Spirit of the sole Connected by essence Descending above Away from the moon |
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Essential Distress Junior Member
since 2004-01-22
Posts 33 |
i think you need to let go of structure.... hahaaaaa nah its good. pretty short though. whats the deal there? |
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ascending_ecstasy Member
since 2004-01-21
Posts 102 |
hahaha!!! lol.... this was written BEFORE i learnt of structure. i dunno why it's short... there wasnt much else to write. my trip to the moon was short i guess eh? lol... |
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