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RedDiamond1307 Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 20 |
Love is unconditional. It has no limitations, Love knows not of color ot religion. That has been proven through out our generations. Love is unexceptional. Beyond criticism or objection, I look at you and with out a doubt You are the object of my affection. Love is undeniable. It's unquestionably true. Tell me how does it make you feel, When I say, "I love you?" Love is unadulterated. Nothing added, pure, for love. There are so many things in life, we put up with and endure. Love is unforgettable. Impossible to forget, live life to the full love and be loved? Don't have any regrets. Love is unparalleled/ unrivaled. Having no equal, supreme, your touch, your kiss, means everything. You are the man of my dreams. Love is unequivocal. Completely clear in meaning, If so, why do some suffer heartache? And why is there not always a happy ending? Who knows the meaning of true love? The answers, I wish I knew. For to love and be loved, We need no credentials. For love is underestimated. We do not realize it's full potential. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I really like this. I am writing a peom on love at the moment actually. I doubt it will come even close to this, but hopefully it wont be too bad!:-) I hope to hear more! ~kissa~ |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I really enjoyed this a lot. You are a talented writer, and I look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for the read. Jen Whoever said "Tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all" obviously never loved. |
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ascending_ecstasy Member
since 2004-01-21
Posts 102 |
Why is everyone writing about love? Is this not a teenage forum? How old is everyone? I am 14. I shall not write of love... but if you feel you have experienced it i will not beg to differ. That was pretty good, but maybe look at the rhyming. |
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RedDiamond1307 Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 20 |
ok first of all your 14...don't cretaque me on my writing when I've been writing poetry sense I was 12 and now I'm 19..... thank you.... |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
This was a really good poem...and I agree with it's point. I'm glad I came across it...it made my day. Thank you for the read. ~J.Lynn  *¤§¤*You are born helpless...and you die helpless...*¤§¤* |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
critique is spelled like this and since is spelled like this, read it, learn. the guy was just giving you feedback. dont jump on him. i think that you should come up with a more creative way to describe love. this was kinda cliched, but most of this forum is. it was better than most, not as good as others. i want to read more of your stuff though. -alex now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
nice job, i enjoyed it. |
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croyles Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 102 |
I didnt really think it was cliche, then again it could be that i dont have such a stron sense for poetry. I liked you poem, but i think if you choose to make it rhyme you should use a proper metre, if your doing anything close to a freeverse with rhymes it usually makes the poem sound takki. Good job though. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write, I enjoyed this!  Merry Christmas!  ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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