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SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

0 posted 2004-01-19 03:20 AM

I must've been crazy
Crazy for loving you
I was so crazy
Thinking that you loved me too
I'm so crazy
And yea I'm kind of insane
Cause I cry like a baby
At the smallest mention of your name
I wish I could have seen
How it would eventually kill me
But then
I probably would've done it all again
Because I'm crazy
Crazy cause I still love you

I know I shouldn't let it be true
But I can't help it
I fell in love with you

I'm downright insane
To harbor these feelings
When to you
It was all just a game
And I hate being the horse
When you have the reign
So let me go

I'm crazy
It's true, you know
I'm crazy
For letting my love for you grow
I'm crazy
And now I'm so blue
I wish I wasn't crazy
Crazy for loving you

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

1 posted 2004-01-19 05:10 AM

im lovin this poem its awesome im feelin you!keep up the good writin luv
-*-broken627-*-
-*-men can only break your heart so many times before it shatters and you lose all hope-*-

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

2 posted 2004-01-19 11:51 AM

OMG OMG....i swear u should be a poetrist ...u r soo good keep writing and writing we all wanna hear from u..

BE STRONG DONT GIVE UP IF HE GIVES U ANOTHER CHANCE OR U GIVE HIM ANOTHER CHANCE

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-01-19 10:47 PM

This poem has to be the best poem i personally have read so far. I dont know if its because i can totally relate to it or what, but i am totally in love with this poem! I think we all go crazy a one point in our lives. ~lol~ I hope to hear more!
love
kissa

~There are three things we will endure-faith, hope and love-and the greatest of these, is love.~ 1 corinthians 13:13

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

4 posted 2004-01-19 11:00 PM

I feel the same way you do. This poem was good, thanks for the read.
Jen

Whoever said "Tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all" obviously never loved.

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

5 posted 2004-01-22 01:34 AM

Ok now i know everyone is praising this poem, so I just want to be honest with you. It wasn't the greatest but... You musn't force your rhyming! And forget structure, it doesn't matter how long your lines are. Let them flow from within. It is a good poem, and may ont necessarilly need editing. Read it over and see if it reads smoothly enough, does it? If it does, then you are happy with your writing, and you should leave it. If it doesn't... consider losing structure. And not forcing the rhymes.

chicken
Junior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 44

6 posted 2004-01-23 12:14 PM

Crazy poem! nah well done graet write love to hear more of ur stuff! x

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