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layla
Member

since 2000-11-19

Posts 74

0 posted 2004-01-15 02:14 AM

I know it will be easy for you
but just forget im alive
its not like I need you
its not like im missing negativity in my life
its not like I need to cry about you everynite
ITs not like I need to think of you all the time
Its not like i need you taking up my mind
I know if you knew my feelings
you would laugh in my face
its all fun to you
nothing but games
but i have a heart
remember that
im not just flesh and bones
Im not some skanky hoe
Im not here just to please you
when ever you feel the need
I thought you cared
but, please, you,
care only for fulfilling your greed
I just thank God that I was Strong
and I never gave in
If i had, with you
it wouldve been a waste of a sin

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

1 posted 2004-01-15 10:06 PM

thsi poem is reallly good leylah....keep it up ...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-01-16 05:50 PM

I like this. I can relate to it, especially right now! Thanks for the poem. I hope to hear more!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2004-01-16 11:00 PM

This is good, I especially liked the end. nice work.
Jen

Whoever said "Tis better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all" obviously never loved.

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

4 posted 2004-07-22 11:40 PM

That was really good, I loved it, looking foward to seeing more from you. I could see the emotion's you put behind this, nice job!!

~*.:Leah:.*~

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

5 posted 2004-07-24 09:27 AM

Gr8 one layla

especially those lines

I just thank God that I was Strong
and I never gave in
If i had, with you
it wouldve been a waste of a sin

are touched

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2004-07-25 06:43 PM

well hey!
I think i know what "sin" yer talking about..
that's scandalist, lemme say lol

but no, seriously- its good you didnt give in. Guys can be like that. They think all the ladies are gonna give it up. But stay strong, and keep having pride in yourself.

good poem.

Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2004-12-26 11:36 PM

I like this!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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