I gave you my heart - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #7

I gave you my heart

lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

0 posted 2004-01-14 10:31 PM

I gave you my heart
I gave you my all
you said it was about time to fall
your call I waited for
everything would be fine you said
time did pass and I did fall again,
and to you I ran
for a short while things were fine
I woke and slept,
a smile on my face
then you spoke words I didn't understand
alone again, without a friend
but here you call again
fall back to the original plan
so though I thought
one night and there was a fight
this I had not intended
next night and again I was befriended
but no not by you
a story was told, the pieces now together
I was right, he was right, they were right
for that night you proved to be a lie
I sit here now wanting to cry
wanting to die
slapped in the face by the one I trusted
how did this happen?
when it was you wanting me?
and me, I gave you my all.....

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

1 posted 2004-01-14 11:39 PM

I liked this i can relate

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

2 posted 2004-01-15 10:33 PM

really really good keep it uppppppppppppp

*bleeding 4 eternity*
Junior Member

since 2005-07-16

Posts 10
Alabama, U.S.

3 posted 2005-07-17 12:15 PM

I can relate to this also.

~*BayBee*~
Member

since 2003-04-09

Posts 65
In The Clouds...

4 posted 2005-07-22 03:18 AM

I really really liked this piece! I can relate to it alot! Loves sucks, huh? (lol) Well, heartbreak! I love how in depth the poem is! Good job!
*Holly*

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.