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Just Friends |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Why do you do it? I just want to know. How could you be so cruel, and never let your feelings show? I tell you i love you, but just as a friend, and you get all mad, so my pity, to you, i send. I pity that you think, everythings about you. i pity that you think, everyone should bow to you. I pity that i feel, the way i feel for you. Sometimes i think, that your the one, and to you i want to run, then sometimes i hate everything about you. Sometimes were Just Friends, sometimes were not. Sometimes i think our friendship, is basically shot! Sometimes i lay in bed and dream, someday well be more than just friends, then i wake up, and suddenly the dream ends. I think i've finally realized, we are meant to be just friends. Reality finally sets it, My heart begins to mend. It wont happen over night, as much as i wish it would. I dont want to be Just friends, but i think we probably should. You like my best friend, and i am trying my best to accept it, but its really hard for me, to sit back, i just want you to quit. I hope you understand, and we can still be Just Friends, no weirdness between us, lets tie up all the loose ends. **~kissa~** |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
hey, thanks for this poem. the style was a little weak overall...like you kinda lost your rhyme scheme as it went along but i guess that's ok. anyway, what i wanted to say was that i really feel what youre going thru. it hurts, doesn't it? my best friend is a guy and i experience a very similar set of emotions towards him. so thanks for posting! |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
I thougth that this was a good poem. Keep it up! |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
I liked it alot! i could tell you put alot of eeling into it! good write, keep it up! ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Throughout my life I've realized that if its too hard, and if getting a significant other means working your butt off to convinve, seduce, please the other- it wasn't meant to be. Isn't love a flowing, natural, and beautiful thing? If friends is just a 'just', then so be it. But wouldn't you rather have a good friend you're sort of attracted to, than to have a boyfriend you really hate? lol regardless, the style of this poem could have flowed a bit better, but the content was great and i liked what you were saying You captured what many of us have felt at one point or another  I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
Great write! I just went through what you expressed. Just friends is so hard when you care for someone. Your ryming got a little weak but the poem was still great! ~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Kissa...you know what? I usually seem to be able to relate to your poems, and this one is no exception. You explained how I'm feeling right now exactly. Nice job.  ~Alli~ I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry. |
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