Teen Poetry #7 |
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You're on my mind once more |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
I saw you that night, And again you were on my mind. Those sparkling eyes oh so bright, But true love is always hard to find. It’s hard to think of anyone else at this time, To love someone else would feel like I committed a crime. You are the special girl on my mind once more, And I do all I can to show that you’re the one I adore. I know again that this can never change the way you feel, But for me to keep writing this shows how my heart is revealed. I hope in time that you can feel the same way, So my tears don’t have to be held back day after day. Well again you are on my mind, And I believe that you are that special find. But I guess its now up to you, To see if your answer turns my skies from gray to blue! |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
the switching of rhyming schemes was neat!! good work. keep your chin up |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
very sweet. great job. |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Thanks for the sweet comments so far im glad you enjoyed! |
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moonguardian2004 Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 64MA, USA |
Great Job! You are really gifted. Smile for me hun! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Hey Chris- Another lovely poem from a lovely guy! ![]() *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I really... love this poem. Any girl who doesnt crumble when reading this need some phicological help!!! lol I really enjoyed reading this. I wish more guys would do this kind of stuff! It is sweet, and any guy could win my heart with a poem like this!!! I hope everything works out for the best!!! ~kissa~ ~There are three things we will endure- faith hope and love- and the greatest of these being love~ 1 Corinthians 13:13 **~kissa~** |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Very good poem, it has a soft tone to it. Thank you for sharing. W.W. |
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ascending_ecstasy Member
since 2004-01-21
Posts 102 |
It made me smile. Good on you, but why does everyone write poems about love?? what about poems about other things?? but anyway, you are a good poet, and i enjoy you're writing, i'll be looking out for more. |
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