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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
Stepping on the ash, Burning out the embers, Becoming a soft half glow Drowned out by the sun. Unconnected. Faces in the distance, Lust leading to fate. Fate leading to the dead ashes, A phoenix rising in my dreams, in this world. Unconnected. This system, this joke, this life... We follow and rise to the fight Just to be broken at the end, Like bubbles in a pop drink, in this world. Unconnected. Their fake headlines ablaze in our eyes, our eyes focused on someone else's future. Our future determined by their lies, in this world. Unconnected. |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
so true, soooo true. i hear you in this one. great expressions, and wonderful imagery. isnt life a dreary dream of hard times and heart aches? well. congrats. keep it up.. |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
nice job |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
reallly reallly good keep up the great work and keep writting more... |
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